【題目】國(guó)內(nèi)某家英文報(bào)紙?jiān)O(shè)有一個(gè)求助信箱(letters to Dr. Helper)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)一份學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀中列出的部分信息,以高三學(xué)生王勇的名義,用英語(yǔ)給Dr. Helper寫一封短信(寫信時(shí)間為2003年2月16日)。

學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀:1、每日在校時(shí)間9小時(shí);

2、每日作業(yè)時(shí)間34小時(shí);

3、每日課外活動(dòng)時(shí)間幾乎沒有;

4、每日睡眠時(shí)間不足。

負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重原因:考試壓力大;作業(yè)多,家長(zhǎng)期望高

生詞:負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重overload 壓力pressure 期望expectation

注意:1、書信格式要正確;

2、表達(dá)要點(diǎn)要全,不能逐句翻譯;

3、詞數(shù)120左右。

Dear Dr. Helper,

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【答案】

Dear Dr. Helper,

I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day I have to stay at school for 9 hours to have lessons and spend at least 3 to 4 hours doing my homework. We teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do what we want. Besides, we even don’t have enough sleep.

There seem to be 3 causes about the overload: the pressure of examinations; too much homework and the high expectations from the parents. We are often warned that if we don’t do our best, we won’t have the chance to go to university.

I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk to. I am looking forward to your advice.

Your sincerely

Wang Yong

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作(求助信),寫作內(nèi)容與學(xué)生日常生活和學(xué)習(xí)有關(guān)。寫作要點(diǎn)為:現(xiàn)狀和三大負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重原因(現(xiàn)象),如何減負(fù)?成文時(shí)要注意:1.文章主要用第一人稱;2.時(shí)態(tài):現(xiàn)在時(shí);3.題目提示的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全;4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型,以提高文章的檔次;5.注意使用一些連接詞,使得文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。6.注意文章的字?jǐn)?shù)控制,120單詞左右。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章格式正確,內(nèi)容齊全,結(jié)構(gòu)合理,使用高級(jí)句子。I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句;We teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do what we want.并列句,but表示轉(zhuǎn)折;We are often warned that if we don’t do our best, we won’t have the chance to go to university.賓語(yǔ)從句和條件狀語(yǔ)從句完美結(jié)合;I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk to.動(dòng)詞不定式目的狀語(yǔ);另外,Besides的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。

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