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第二節(jié)：書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)
假設(shè)你是英國(guó)倫敦的Allan，前幾天你參加了一家旅行社組織的哈爾濱三日游的活動(dòng)。下面是這家旅行社的廣告，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面廣告中箭頭所指內(nèi)容對(duì)其不實(shí)之處向消費(fèi)者協(xié)會(huì)寫一封投訴信。
 
注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；信的格式和開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to express my complaint about the service of Morning Star Travel Agency．
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Yours faithfully，
Allan

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Sir or Madam.
I’m writing to express my complaint about the service of Morning Star Travel Agency.
A few days ago, I joined a three-day trip to Harbin with this travel agency. I found a big difference between their ads and action.
As they say, they provide large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus without any air-conditioning. Yes, they served us lunch, but the food tasted terrible, some even with sand. We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower; we only bathed in cold water. As for sightseeing, the guides led us to several expensive souvenir shops, which wasted us much time. As a result, two scenery spots were left unseen in the end.
We do hope something can be done to prevent such things happening again.
Yours sincerely,
Allan

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