城市與農(nóng)村的學(xué)生對(duì)將來是否從事教師這一職業(yè)有著不同的看法:

城市學(xué)生

(1) 城市的父母重視教師,尊重教師

(2) 教育設(shè)施先進(jìn)

(3) 工作時(shí)間不長(zhǎng),工資高

農(nóng)村學(xué)生

 

(1) 農(nóng)村各方面不發(fā)達(dá)

(2) 農(nóng)村的老師得不到重視

(3) 教育設(shè)施落后

(4) 工作時(shí)間長(zhǎng),工資低

你的觀點(diǎn)

政府應(yīng)該更加重視農(nóng)村教育,改善農(nóng)村教師的工作和生活條件

參考詞匯:設(shè)施:facilities 農(nóng)村的: rural

【寫作內(nèi)容】請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上信息,寫一篇英語短文。

【寫作要求】只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

 

 

 

 

Students in big cities and students in rural areas have different ideas on whether they would be a teacher or not in the future. In the opinion of the students in big cities, parents pay a lot of attention to their children’s education and respect teachers. Besides, schools in big cities are equipped with advanced facilities, and teachers there can often get a high-paid job with short working hours. However, the students in rural areas think, being less developed in all aspects, rural areas have insufficient educational facilities and teachers there are often less valued with longer working hours and lower income. As far as I’m concerned, the government should invest more in rural education and make every effort to improve the rural teachers’ working and living conditions.

【解析】

試題分析:題目要求根據(jù)所給信息寫一篇短文,主要論述城市孩子和農(nóng)村孩子對(duì)是否從事教師這一職業(yè)的看法。注意只能使用5個(gè)句子進(jìn)行寫作,要涵蓋所有要點(diǎn);要求句子結(jié)構(gòu)要準(zhǔn)確,信息內(nèi)容要完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)要連貫;不能出現(xiàn)拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。

亮點(diǎn)說明:范文開始先總寫城市孩子和農(nóng)村孩子有著不同的看法。

范文使用了賓語從句whether they would be a teacher or not in the future;非謂語動(dòng)詞being less developed in all aspects等重點(diǎn)語法知識(shí);

范文使用了較多的固定短語和搭配:In the opinion of;pay a lot of attention to;are equipped with;As far as I’m concerned;make every effort to do sth等,使作文內(nèi)容得到了充實(shí);

范文注意使用Besides, However, and, As far as I’m concerned等來銜接前后句和前后段,使作文銜接緊密,條理清晰;

范文還使用了一些高級(jí)詞匯:advanced, facilities, nsufficient, Income, invest, conditions等,提高了作文的層次。

考點(diǎn):材料類作文

 

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