Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）, 并在其下寫出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

There will be a speech on our school playground this Saturday afternoon, which theme is “To civilize schoolyard is my responsibility”. All the teachers and students required to attend. In the activity, the first two winner in each grade will give such valuable advice as follows: we should not litter somewhere in order to keep our campus clean; we should love flowers, grass and trees such that everyone can enjoy the greenness; we should behave well instead of run after one another, quarreling and fighting noisy; we should care for the others so that our school will be full with love. We believe your school will become more and more beautiful and peaceful.

Answer 1

1.which— whose

2.required前加are

3.winner— winners

4.somewhere— anywhere

5.trees后的such— so

6.run— running

7.noisy— noisily

8.others前的the去掉

9.with— of 或full—filled

10.your→our

【解析】

試題分析：本文考查了介詞，名詞，非謂語動(dòng)詞，固定搭配等知識(shí)。

1.which— whose，考查定語從句，先行詞是speech，指物應(yīng)該用whose。故which改成whose。

2.required前加are，考查被動(dòng)語態(tài)，師生應(yīng)該是被要求參加，故required前面加are。

3. winners ，考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)，winner前面修飾詞是the first two,前面2個(gè)應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)。故winner改為winners。

4. anywhere，考查不定代詞，前面是we should not litter somewhere，與not一起使用的不能是somewhere，somewhere一半表示肯定。故somewhere改成anywhere。

5. trees后的such— so，考查搭配，so that表示順承前面的結(jié)果，such that沒有此用法，故such改為so。

6. run— running，考查連詞，instead of后面只能接名詞或者動(dòng)名詞，不能用動(dòng)詞，故run改為running。

7. noisily，考查副詞，noisy修飾的是fighting，只有副詞才能修飾動(dòng)名詞，故noise改為noisily.

8. others前的the去掉,考查的是代詞的用法，others表示的就是其他人，不用加the，故去掉the。

9. of 或full—filled�？疾楣潭ù钆洌琤e full of 和be filled with都可以，故with改為 of 或full改為filled。

10. our �？疾榈谝蝗朔Q。前面是We，與后面要一致，也應(yīng)該是第一人稱，故把your改為our。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。