Question

植樹綠化本是件好事，但有些新建的單位偏偏要栽大樹，尤其是古樹，請(qǐng)根據(jù)此現(xiàn)象寫一篇100詞左右的短文，并發(fā)表自己的見解。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Trees are our friends. Every year we plant more trees on the mountains, in the filed as well as in the city. Trees can create a good environment for man. However, people intend to dig out old trees and plant them in the city, in the hope of making city more beautiful. In my opinion, it is not a good idea. Old trees grow well in their own places. But once they are carried to a new place, most of them would die because of the damage done to them and the new condition. Moving them means killing them. Besides, the costs on them would be very great. It’s really a waste of money.

【解析】這是一篇開放式作文，就給了話題，就植樹綠化本是件好事，但有的單位要栽大樹，的問題給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，幾乎沒有要點(diǎn)，要求學(xué)生組織語言的能力要強(qiáng)，可以列出提綱在展開說明，比如樹的重要性，為什么要保護(hù)樹，砍伐樹木的危害和怎么解決這個(gè)問題。寫作時(shí)可以適當(dāng)使用高級(jí)句型，注意句子的連貫。