分析 中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)報(bào)社正開(kāi)展一場(chǎng)題為"Young teachers or elderly teachers,which do you prefer?"的討論活動(dòng).根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容:老年教師,教學(xué)耐心.講解細(xì)致.經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富;青年教師,精力充沛.教學(xué)活潑.勇于創(chuàng)新.最后一定不要忘記講述自己的觀點(diǎn),簡(jiǎn)述一下原因.寫(xiě)作時(shí),不要單純地將提示語(yǔ)直譯且羅列出來(lái),注意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞,使得語(yǔ)句通順,同時(shí)也會(huì)讓理由充分,更有說(shuō)服力.
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文為書(shū)面表達(dá)三段式,層次分明,一目了然.第一段講述觀點(diǎn)一:有人喜歡老年教師;第二段講述觀點(diǎn)二:有人喜歡老年教師;最后一段談?wù)撟约旱挠^點(diǎn).文中多處運(yùn)用連詞,將整篇文章有機(jī)銜接起來(lái),如what's more,however,in addition,besides等.注意一些講述觀點(diǎn)的短語(yǔ)或句型:opinions are divided..,in their views,as for me,I prefer…等.文中最后一段Besides,most young teachers are willing to devote themselves to their work,which without doubt is beneficial to us students.此處用到非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,which指代前面一句話,表明大多數(shù)年輕老師愿意全身心投入工作,毫無(wú)疑問(wèn),對(duì)我們學(xué)生是有利的,有力地支撐了自己的觀點(diǎn).
Some students like elderly teachers'teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience.(高分句型一)
In addition,they are more ready to accept or create new ideas,including teaching.(高分句型二)
As for me,I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers,for we students have much in common with young teachers.(高分句型三)
Besides,most young teachers are willing to devote themselves to their work,which without doubt is beneficial to us students.(高分句型四)
解答 Opinions are divided on this question.Some students like elderly teachers'teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience.(高分句型一)What's more,elderly teachers tend to be more patient and careful with explanations.
Some students,however,prefer to be taught by young teachers.In their views,young teachers are more energetic and enthusiastic.Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting.In addition,they are more ready to accept or create new ideas,including teaching.(高分句型二)
As for me,I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers,for we students have much in common with young teachers.(高分句型三) They are our friends as well as teachers.Besides,most young teachers are willing to devote themselves to their work,which without doubt is beneficial to us students.(高分句型四)
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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