假定你是李華，準備參加學(xué)校舉辦的主題為“健康成長”的英語作文比賽。請按要求寫一篇短文，主要內(nèi)容包括：

樂觀的態(tài)度；2. 努力學(xué)習(xí)；3. 參加鍛煉。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；

3. 開頭已為你寫好。

Each of us is eager to grow up happily and healthily, but how can we achieve it?____________________

 

 

 

 

 

One possible version：

Each of us is eager to grow up happily and healthily, but how can we achieve this goal ?

Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hardships. We should be brave in face of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to make our country stronger and enjoy our life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.

If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達要求以“健康成長”為內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，要包括樂觀的態(tài)度；努力學(xué)習(xí)；和參加鍛煉等三方面內(nèi)容。文字要求只給出了提綱，在寫作時需要同學(xué)們發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫，內(nèi)容豐滿。比如努力學(xué)習(xí)的目的，參加鍛煉的好處等等。同時，在寫作時也要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，比如表順序的詞first ，second ，third，表示遞進關(guān)系的 what’s more ,besides 等。為了增加文章的亮點，還應(yīng)該盡量使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，比如定語從句，狀語從句，非謂語等等。最后，要注意文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時，用第一人稱。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達短小精悍，要點全面，層次分明，語言連貫流暢。開頭以設(shè)問的方式引出健康的話題。然后用firstly，secondly 和thirdly分別介紹了對待生活應(yīng)持有的態(tài)度，要努力學(xué)習(xí)和積極鍛煉等三方面要點。作者不僅使用了一些如consist of ，hardship，in face of等高級詞匯、短語和連接詞not only…..but also，同時還使用了條件狀語從句If we have the power, If we do these things well,目的狀語從句so that we can keep fit，這些都成為了文章的亮點所在，提高了文章的檔次。

考點：考查提綱作文

 

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