Question

6．In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
By taking responsibilities，we can be more and more capable．Without responsibilities，we can't live a qualified life．
通過承擔責任，我們會越來越有能力．沒有責任，我們無法過有質(zhì)量的生活．
高分句型二：
If we're not diligent，we can neither support ourselves nor achieve our goals．
如果我們不努力，我們既不支持自己也無法達到我們的目標．

解答 As is vividly showed in the picture a cat is addicted in the temptation of fish while a mouse is carrying a generation of rice secretly run away．This is an easy but very important story，telling us that we have to focus on the responsibility we should bear，and then the things great enough in the world．If the cat is not tempted by food，forget its own responsibilities，the mouse will not escape．
Anyone can't avoid taking responsibilities when he is alive．By taking responsibilities，we can be more and more capable．Without responsibilities，we can't live a qualified life（高分句型一）．
As far as I'm concerned，responsibilities include three aspects in our life：First，we must work hard．If we're not diligent，we can neither support ourselves nor achieve our goals（高分句型二）．Second，we must take care of our parents，since they have brought us up．We must pay back the love to them．If we don't treat our parents well，maybe we'll be abandoned by our children when we're old．Third，we must keep on learning，because our life is an infinite book．We're always reading at the first page of this book．If we don't go on learning，we can't keep pace with the times．
These are my opinions that I will act as I say．I believe my life will be more colorful if I do my best to fulfill my responsibilities．

點評 這是一篇開放式作文，也是看圖作文，認真讀圖，可知圖畫反映了人們對待同樣問題的不同看法，寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．