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4．假設(shè)你是李華，在一個英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上，你看到一位名叫Big Boy的中學(xué)生發(fā)帖（post）尋求幫助．
請根據(jù)以下提示回帖：、
1．告訴他要理解、尊重母親；
2．給他提出解決問題的具體建議；
3．希望與他進(jìn)一步交流．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫．
Dear Big Boy，As a student of your age，I understand your situation．The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers．【高分句型一】However，it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings．Here are a few suggestions．（告訴Big Boy要理解母親）
First，it's advisable to talk more with your mom．Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better．They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things．Second，you should learn to do your own things well，proving to your mom that you are already a"Grown-up"．【高分句型二】It's even better if you could share more of the housework，such as cleaning，washing and cooking．（給Big Boy提出解決問題的具體建議）
Hope these tips are helpful to you and can get along well with your mother．（表達(dá)祝愿）
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封回帖，根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一和第二人稱展開敘述，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．內(nèi)容主要包括：一告訴Big Boy要理解母親；二給Big Boy提出解決問題的具體建議；三表達(dá)祝愿．
高分句型：
1．The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers．
句子里you are facing 是The problem 的定語從句．
你面對的問題在我們青少年里是很常見的．
2．Second，you should learn to do your own things well，proving to your mom that you are already a"Grown-up"．
句子里proving to your mom 是結(jié)果狀語，prove和主語you是主動關(guān)系．that you are already a"Grown-up"．
是prove的賓語從句．
第二，你應(yīng)該學(xué)會自己把事情做好，向你的媽媽證明你已經(jīng)是一個成年人了．

解答 Dear Big Boy，
     As a student of your age，I understand your situation．The problem you are facing is common among our teenagers．【高分句型一】However，it should be wise not to do anything that may hurt her feelings．Here are a few suggestions．（告訴Big Boy要理解母親）
    First，it's advisable to talk more with your mom．Heart to heart talks help you understand each other better．They are also opportunities to let her know your ideas of and attitudes toward many things．Second，you should learn to do your own things well，proving to your mom that you are already a"Grown-up"．【高分句型二】It's even better if you could share more of the housework，such as cleaning，washing and cooking．（給Big Boy提出解決問題的具體建議）
    Hope these tips are helpful to you and can get along well with your mother．（表達(dá)祝愿）
    Yours
    Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．