Question

11．假設(shè)你是李華，5月1日你和同學參觀了北京大學．請根據(jù)下圖，用英語寫一篇日記．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．

May 1                Monday                  Fine
It's a fine day today and
we paid a visit to Beijing University．Early in the morning，we arrived at the gate where a professor gave us a warm welcome．We were then shown around．
We first went to the library with a large collection of books，where we saw students reading attentively．Next students sitting under trees，studying，which made a beautiful picture．At about 4 in the afternoon．We attended a lecture on science given by a famous professor．Before we knew it，it was time to say goodbye．
Now sitting at the table I feel very excited．I will make every effort to go to college．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
Early in the morning，we arrived at the gate where a professor gave us a warm welcome
清晨，我們來到了一個教授給了我們熱烈的歡迎之門．
高分句型二：
We first went to the library with a large collection of books，where we saw students reading attentively．
我們先去一個大的藏書的圖書館，在那里我們看到了學生正在細讀．

解答 May 1 Monday                                                                         Fine
It's a fine day today and we paid a visit to Beijing University．Early in the morning，we arrived at the gate where a professor gave us a warm welcome（高分句型一）．We were then shown around．
We first went to the library with a large collection of books，where we saw students reading attentively（高分句型二）．Next students sitting under trees，studying，which made a beautiful picture．At about 4 in the afternoon．We attended a lecture on science given by a famous professor．Before we knew it，it was time to say goodbye．
Now sitting at the table I feel very excited．I will make every effort to go to college．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．