Question

13．你班將舉辦一次班會活動，討論主題為"The Journey of life starts from setting a goal"．請按下列要求用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文：
1．談?wù)勀銓�這個話題的看法．
2．舉例說明理由．
注意：短文的開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）
Our class will hold a discussion of which the topic is"the journey of life starts from setting a goal"．                                                                                

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一篇關(guān)于"The Journey of life starts from setting a goal"．的作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：談?wù)勀銓�這個話題的看法．舉例說明理由．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為設(shè)立目標(biāo)的重要性．第二部分為作者的看法及理由．
重點短語與句型：
There is no denying that 不可否認(rèn)…
take control of 控制
head for朝…方向前進
on the contrary相反
高分句型一：Our class will hold a discussion of which the topic is"the journey of blife starts from setting a goal．此句用了介詞加關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)定語從句
高分句型二：With a clear direction，and with certain plans，you will straight get what you want．此句用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句

解答 Our class will hold a discussion of which the topic is"the journey of life starts from setting a goal．（高分句型一）There is no denying that setting a goal is very important．（設(shè)立目標(biāo)的重要性）
By setting goals you are taking control of your life．It is having a map to guide you to where you want to head for．With a clear direction，and with certain plans，you will straight get what you want（高分句型二）．On the contrary，without a goal，you will live a wandering life．You do not know where to go，what you want．Then your life becomes dull and meaningless just like the dead water in a muddy lake．We find that successful people are always those having and achieving their goals．They set goals，short-term or long-run，to help realize their dreams．Therefore，from my point of view，we should make clear what we really want and follow our plans as many winners do．（作者的看法及理由）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．