Question

3．請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文．詞數不少于50．
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim．Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so．

Answer 1

分析 看圖作文分析 本文為看圖作文．根據對圖片的理解及英語提示寫一篇短文．寫作時可按"二段式"來寫，首先描述圖片點明主題，分析其含義，最后發(fā)表感想．基本時態(tài)為一般現在時．
亮點句型一：What they see is only the good points of their own，yet the weak points of the other，such people also，exist in real life．他們所看到的只是他們自己的優(yōu)點，而另一些人的弱點也存在于這樣的人的現實生活中．本句是一個名詞性從句，句中What they see 是主語從句．
亮點句型二：They like to show off and always compare their own strengths with others'weaknesses，which make them blind to their own faults．他們喜歡炫耀自己，總是把自己的優(yōu)點與別人的弱點相比，這使他們對自己的缺點視而不見．本句中which make them blind to their own faults是一個非限制性定語從句，which指代主句的內容．

解答 I think both the men in the picture are too self-satisfied．While the big man says"I'm taller than you．"，the small man proudly replys"I'm slimmer than you"．What they see is only the good points of their own，yet the weak points of the other，such people also，exist in real life．（亮點句型一） They like to show off and always compare their own strengths with others'weaknesses，which make them blind to their own faults．（亮點句型二）【描述分析圖畫】
  As a matter of fact．every bean has its black and every one has his own advantages．，we should never think that we are perfect while others are good for nothing．Instead，we should learn from others'good points to perfect ourselves．【發(fā)表感想】

點評 看圖作文要求將畫面所包含的有效信息用文字表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．