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【題目】第二屆“一帶一路”國際合作高峰論壇（the Belt and Road Forum for international Cooperation）將于2019年在中國舉辦。組委會向全球征集志愿者。假設你是李華，請按下面的要求給組委會寫一封自薦信。

內(nèi)容應包括：

1.個人情況：年齡、性別、學歷；

2.個人條件：性格、興趣愛好、語言能力等；

3.個人優(yōu)勢: 如熟悉中國傳統(tǒng)文化，了解“一帶一路”政策等;

4. 其他…

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for reading my letter.

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I am looking forward to receiving your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for reading my letter. As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming, I'd like very much to be a volunteer.

My name is Li Hua , an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. I think I’m adequate to the job. First of all , I am organized, energetic, easy-going and patient, which will contribute to a good job. Secondly , a good command of Chinese and English will help me communicate with participants fluently during the forum. Most importantly, being equipped with a rich knowledge of Chinese history and especially traditional culture enables me to spread our splendid culture. Volunteering is of huge benefit to society and myself. I would be more than happy if I could be given the opportunity. I will surely spare no efforts.

I am looking forward to receiving your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文為自薦信。自薦信是向用人單位延期謀求職位的書信。寫好自薦信有4個要素。說明原因，推銷自己，表達認識及表明態(tài)度，隊伍資料，這是全文的核心內(nèi)容。

本文內(nèi)容完整，要點齊全。用詞態(tài)度謙虛、語氣委婉，措辭得體。既正確評價自己，突出個性特長，同時語氣委婉。文中運用了大量的高級詞匯如：contribute to …, be equipped with…, a good command of…, enable sb. to spread our splendid culture, be of huge benefit to, more than happy …,spare no efforts，使文章語言生動。順序連詞First of all ,.. Secondly… , Most importantly…的運用，讓文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊閉，敘述有條不紊。同時運用了許多高級的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語做主語：being equipped with a rich knowledge of Chinese history and especially traditional culture enables me to spread our splendid culture.還有各種復合句，如狀語從句As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming, I'd like very much to be a volunteer.；定語從句I am organized, energetic, easy-going and patient, which will contribute to a good job.等，彰顯了對英語的熟練掌握，可稱的是一篇好文章。