Question

假定你是Peter，一個(gè)星期前李華給你寫(xiě)信咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好英文�，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給李華回信。

要點(diǎn)：1. 努力學(xué)習(xí)

2. 看英文書(shū)刊、電視

3. 學(xué)唱英文歌曲

4. 交外國(guó)朋友

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Li Hua,

I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn English well.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn English well. Here are my suggestions for your reference.

First, it is important to work hard at English, because there is a saying goes，“No pains ,no gains.” Then it also helps if you watch TV and read books, magazines, newspapers in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing English songs. For by doing so you’ll learn and remember English words more easily. You can also make friends with foreigners. I am quite sure that they will tell you a lot about English and help you learn English.

Please try and write to me in English next time.

Sincerely yours,

Peter

【解析】

試題分析：本文非常簡(jiǎn)單，是關(guān)于如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ)的建議。在文字提示中，各種建議都給了出來(lái)，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要使用連接詞把各個(gè)建議連接起來(lái)，如first, second，then等，讓各個(gè)要點(diǎn)成為一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體。同時(shí)也可以使用高級(jí)的諺語(yǔ)如：“No pains ,no gains.”等�？梢源蟠筇崾疚恼碌臋n次。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文從形式上來(lái)說(shuō)，屬于應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信。同時(shí)也屬于提綱類作文，因?yàn)橐�點(diǎn)都給了出來(lái)，在立意上沒(méi)有太大的難度。要注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，要把所有的內(nèi)容都包括在內(nèi)。本篇范文中的“No pains ,no gains.用的很好，以后在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候可以由意識(shí)的多運(yùn)用諺語(yǔ)。