Question

假如你是李華，你的英國筆友George不久前去美國留學，他給你寫信說很不適應那里的生活。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語給他寫一封回信，鼓勵他勇敢面對。

尊重當?shù)氐娘L俗習慣；

與美國學生多交流；

積極參加戶外活動；

注意與人交往的禮儀。

注意：1.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear George，

How nice to hear from you again! ______________________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear George,

How nice to hear from you again! I think it is natural for you not to get used to the life there. Here I have some suggestions for you.

First of all, you should respect the local customs there and try to involve yourself in the natives’ lives. Just as the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as Romans do.” Secondly, don’t be afraid to communicate with American students and make friends with them. Friendship will bring you happiness. What’s more, it is better for you to join in more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and have fun. Finally, mind your own manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your friends.

I do hope my suggestions will help. May you adapt to your new life and enjoy your stay there.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信格式的話題類作文。假如你是李華，你的英國筆友George不久前去美國留學，他給你寫信說很不適應那里的生活。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語給他寫一封回信，鼓勵他勇敢面對。要把所提示的點寫全，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，寫作時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色，注意要求的字數(shù)在100詞左右，不要太多或太少，注意開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。

本文包含了諺語Just as the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as Romans do.”正如諺語所說“入鄉(xiāng)隨俗”。運用了固定模式：First of all,…Secondly,…Finally,...。I think it is natural for you not to get used to the life there.本句包含一個賓語從句和it作形式主語動詞不定式作真正主語。What’s more, it is better for you to join in more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and have fun.包含which引導的非限制性定語從句。What’s more ，…也給文章增色不少。I do hope my suggestions will help.這是一個含賓語從句的復合句，同時句中運用了do來強調(diào)謂語，更是難得的亮點。

考點：考查書信格式的話題類作文。