Question

短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1.5分，滿分15分）
文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在此處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一個橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞�！　�
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分。
All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect.” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise, and one day we will make it. It’s easy to understand. Once I wanted to learn swimming. At first I found difficult to control my body. I just sank into the water. I feel very frightened. Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed. I went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practised. A day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming poo1, I sudden found that I could swim. How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before.     

Answer 1

All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect.” It tells us unless we want
makes                 if
to realize our aim, we should practise and one day we will make it. It’s easy to understand. Once I wanted to learn swimming. At first I found∧difficult to control
it
my body. I just sank into the water. I feel very frightened. Then I watched others
felt
who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed. I went to the swimming
it                        success
pool every day, learned from them and practised. A day, when my friend pushed me
One
into the swimming poo1, I sudden found that I could swim. How exciting I was!
suddenly                        excited
Now I can swim much more better than before.

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