Question

假若你是二十一世紀英文報的編輯Tom，高二學生李華來信說，他即將升入高三，感覺壓力大，很擔心不能適應高三學習及生活。請用英文給該同學寫一封回信。
內(nèi)容要點如下：
1．表示理解并給予安慰；
2．提出建議并說明理由。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；
3．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Hi Li Hua,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a difficult time at present. 

 

 

Yours,
Tom

 

Answer 1

Hi Li Hua,

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a difficult time these days. The truth is that every senior three student will face the biggest challenge in their life so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to release your pressure .Four useful tips are listed as follows.

Firstly, find out which subject you are not good at and make a detailed study plan to improve it with your own effort and the teachers’ help. Secondly, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of reducing pressure .In addition, go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exercise is a relaxing way to get rid of stress. And finally, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards study can be of some help.

I hope you’ll soon adapt yourself to the senior three life.

Yours

Tom

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，要求按照李華寫的求助信寫一封回信，根據(jù)信中提到的困擾表示理解和安慰，并提出建議并給出理由。所以考生在寫作的時候，要圍繞來信的問題一一給與解答。但是光翻譯要點肯定不行，還要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，關(guān)鍵的是在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。也要注意人稱，時態(tài)語態(tài)和常見的語法問題，同時在列舉建議和理由的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。

【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些詞組：as follows如下， a good way of 好方法，get rid of消除， be of some help有些幫助，句式上體現(xiàn)出多變的特點，The truth is that every senior three student will face the biggest challenge in their life so you don’t have to worry so much. 這句話使用了表語從句，The important thing is to learn to release your pressure .這句話使用了不定式，find out which subject you are not good at and make a detailed study plan to improve it with your own effort and the teachers’ help. talk to someone you trust about how you feel. 這句話使用了賓語從句。文章還使用了合適的連接詞Firstly, Secondly, In addition, And finally使文章很連貫。

考點：考查提綱類書面表達