Question

4．團隊合作（teamwork）在現(xiàn)代是非常重要的．請根據(jù)以下要點，簡要寫一篇關(guān)于teamwork的演講稿，并表明你自己的看法．
合作重要性：
1．在學(xué)習(xí)和工作中的重要性；
2．節(jié)約時間精力和資源；
3．彼此有相互學(xué)習(xí)的機會．
在學(xué)習(xí)中怎樣與人合作．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120字左右；
2．演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好；
3．可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；
Good morning，everyone!My topic today is"Teamwork"．
                                                                                                    
Thanks for your listening!

Answer 1

分析 No only can cooperation save us lots of time，energy and resources，but also we can learn much from each other．句子里No only…but also 表示"不但…而且"，can cooperation save us lots of time用了倒裝．
合作不但節(jié)約我們的時間精力和資源而且彼此有相互學(xué)習(xí)的機會．
So we'll be lucky enough to find someone who holds the same belief to cooperate with due to the fact that we can understand each other．句子里who引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞someone；cooperate with表示"合作"； due to 表示"因為"；that引導(dǎo)同位語從句，解釋the fact 的內(nèi)容．
因此由于互相理解，我們很幸運有一個志同道合的人合作．

解答 Good morning，everyone!My topic today is"Teamwork"．（點明演講主題）
    In this modern world，if we want to complete our work more efficiently，there is an urgent need for all of us to learn to cooperate with others．No only can cooperation save us lots of time，energy and resources，but also we can learn much from each other．【高分句型一】So we'll be lucky enough to find someone who holds the same belief to cooperate with due to the fact that we can understand each other．【高分句型二】（團隊合作在學(xué)習(xí)和工作中的重要性）
    As a senior three student，in our study we should learn to cooperate with others．For example，when we come across a difficult exercise，we can talk with each other to get the right answer．Personally，teamwork means we should try to combine our ideas with others'．（自己的經(jīng)歷證明）
    Thanks for your listening．

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