Question

最近中國(guó)的空氣質(zhì)量引起了廣泛的關(guān)注。請(qǐng)閱讀下面的漫畫(huà)，按要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

內(nèi)容要求： 1. 簡(jiǎn)要描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容；

2. 簡(jiǎn)要分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因；

3. 針對(duì)以上現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶ǎㄖ辽賰牲c(diǎn)）。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)150左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2.參考詞匯：口罩mask； 霧霾haze

Recently, the air quality in China _________________________________________

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Answer 1

Recently, the air quality in China has raised widespread concern. As is indicated in the picture, an old man and his grandson are taking a walk in the street with masks covering their mouths. As the haze is becoming heavier and heavier, they find it hard to see the buildings and trees around them clearly.

The picture conveyed here is that air pollution is quite severe in China. Many factors account for this phenomenon. In the first place, vehicles sending large quantities of poisonous gases are a major source of air pollution. Furthermore, factories that release a great deal of smoke are also responsible for the poor air quality. Besides, burning materials like coal or oil for homes and offices is another major contributor to air pollution.

Personally, to better the air quality, the government and the common citizens should make joint efforts. Riding and walking are wise options for public travels. Meanwhile, effective laws are supposed to be made to guarantee good air quality.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給漫畫(huà)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于空氣質(zhì)量的短文。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：簡(jiǎn)述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容；分析產(chǎn)生此現(xiàn)象的原因；談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。至少要�?xiě)兩點(diǎn)看法，詞數(shù)在150詞左右，開(kāi)頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；注意使用參考詞匯；不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：

范文使用了較多的高級(jí)詞匯：concern，factor，phenomenon，vehicles，major，F(xiàn)urthermore，joint，guarantee等，說(shuō)明作者的詞匯量較大，靈活運(yùn)用單詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句的能力較強(qiáng)；

范文注意使用Recently, In the first place, Furthermore, Besides, Personally, Meanwhile等銜接句子和段落，避免了使用firstly, secondly等一般詞匯，比較有新意；

范文使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句As is indicated in the picture；with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)with masks covering their mouths；原因狀語(yǔ)從句As the haze is becoming heavier and heavier；表語(yǔ)從句that air pollution is quite severe in China；定語(yǔ)從句that release a great deal of smoke等語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，使句式長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合，比較協(xié)調(diào)；

范文使用了一些重要的短語(yǔ)：account for；large quantities of；be responsible for；contributor to；make joint efforts；are supposed to等，充實(shí)了作文的內(nèi)容。

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