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【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。端午節(jié)將至，上周末你和父母去看望爺爺奶奶，并學(xué)習(xí)了包粽子。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，為校刊“英語角”投稿，記述整個過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】With the Dragon Boat Festival right around the corner, last weekend, my parents and I went to see my grandparents. We enjoyed our family time together.

Before going to my grandparents’ home, we went shopping in the nearby supermarket for groceries. We bought some of my grandparents’ favorite food as well as sticky rice and bamboo leaves—ingredients to make the traditional food that we eat during Dragon Boat Festival, Zongzi.

Carrying all our purchases, we went to my grandparents’. Not having seen one another for some time, we were all very happy for the get-together. My grandparents had missed us very much.

After a pleasant chitchat, exchanging the latest news in our lives, I asked my grandma to teach me how to make Zongzi. Grandma then began showing me the “standard procedure” in Zongzi making—soaking the sticky rice and bamboo leaves and washing the red dates. Seeing the bowls and plates of different sizes, I was almost overwhelmed. I had never realized it would take so much delicate handwork to make a Zongzi. However, my grandma proved a great teacher, and I a quick learner.

After making the Zongzi, we sat down to a full table of family traditional dishes that my parents had cooked. Not only did we enjoy the delicious meal, but also the funny stories that were told around the dinner table. It’s true, laughter is the best medicine.

I was so happy that my whole family praised my Zongzi and to see their smiling faces after taking the first bite, it really made my day. I’ll always remember this day. For sure, nothing beats quality time together with family.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于圖畫作文。

第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。端午節(jié)將至，上周末你和父母去看望爺爺奶奶，并學(xué)習(xí)了包粽子。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，為校刊“英語角”投稿，記述整個過程。

第二步：根據(jù)圖片確定文章內(nèi)容和關(guān)鍵詞語，第一幅圖要表達看望爺爺奶奶之前，去超市買禮物和包粽子的材料；第二幅圖表達見到爺爺奶奶的高興之情；第三幅圖表達全家人一起包粽子，作者學(xué)包粽子；第四幅圖表達全家一起進餐、吃粽子、談笑。關(guān)鍵詞語有：went shopping, sticky rice and bamboo leaves, get-together, Zongzi making, traditional dishes, laughter.

第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。本文用一般過去時。

第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。