Question

假如你是我市一名高三學(xué)生李華，你打算報考一所外語學(xué)院。你在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上看到上海外國語學(xué)院的招生信息(admission information)，并對此非常感興趣。根據(jù)招生要求，你需要用英語撰寫一份個人申請報告，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

1．記述自己的個性特長及取得的成果；

2．說明進入大學(xué)后的努力方向及設(shè)想等。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：不少于120；開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing to apply to study in your university.

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I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

 

Yours ,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I’m writing to apply to study in your university. I read about the admission information while surfing the net the other day. I’m really interested in it.

　　For one thing, I’m an outgoing girl and I can get on well with all my classmates. For another, I do well in most of my subjects, especially in English. I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies. Speeches delivered by famous people like Martin Luther. King, President Bush and so on, are also my favorite. What’s more, I once won the first prize in an English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellent performances. 

　　As we all know, English is a universal language and I like to communicate with different people, so I intend to major in English if I am admitted into your university. I want to have a job related to languages in the future and I believe I can help promote cultural communication between China and the world. 

　　I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. 

　　　　　　　　                                　               Yours, 

                                                             Li Hua

 

【解析】考察半開放性作文

【寫作指導(dǎo)】

本文要求以李華的口吻撰寫一份個人申請報告報考上海外國語學(xué)院。所以使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時。要點：1．記述自己的個性特長及取得的成果：擅長很多科目，演講和音樂是自己的特長，多次獲獎； 2．說明進入大學(xué)后的努力方向及設(shè)想等：想在英語方面取得突破，更多與其他國家的人進行交流。

本文對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成本文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。

【一句多譯】

1.而且，我曾經(jīng)贏得在我市舉行的演講比賽的第一名，因為杰出表現(xiàn)被授予最佳辯手。

①What’s more, I once won the first prize in an English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellent performances.

②What’s more, I once won the first prize in an English speech contest held in our city，honored the Best Speaker for my excellent performances.

2. 眾所周知，英語是國際語言。

①As we all know, English is a universal language.

②It is known to us all that English is a universal language.