Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

In the village where I grew up, everyone knew an old man, who lived a simply life and spent all his time painting. The villagers used to admiring his works and he often gave his paintings to his friends. Whenever he was offered money, he would not take them. He said he painted for a pleasure. He once gave one of his paintings to my father, whom actually wasn’t interested in art. Years later I found it in our old house. By that time the old man has died and people started to recognize his paintings as great works of art, which was worth lots of money. An art gallery made me an offer of $5,000 for this painting and I nearly sold it, so then I decided not to. It always reminds me my childhood and of the old man who didn’t really want to make money by paint.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】simply→simple

【2】admiring→admire

【3】them→it

【4】去掉a

【5】whom→who

【6】has→had

【7】was→were

【8】so→but

【9】me后加of

【10】paint→painting

【解析】

試題分析：作者村子里有一位老人擅長(zhǎng)作畫，卻不為人所賞識(shí)，直到去世才體現(xiàn)出了他的畫的價(jià)值，作者有幸收藏了一幅，但是卻沒有賣。

【1】simply→simple 考查形容詞。此處為形容詞作定語(yǔ)，修飾后面的名詞，故用simple。

【2】admiring→admire 考查動(dòng)詞。此處為固定搭配：used to do“過(guò)去常常做……”。

【3】them→it 考查代詞。此處指代前面的money，是不可數(shù)名詞，用代詞it指代。

【4】去掉a 考查冠詞。此處pleasure為不可數(shù)名詞，for pleasure也可看成固定搭配，“為了樂(lè)趣”。故去掉a。

【5】whom→who 考查定語(yǔ)從句關(guān)系詞。此處為非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，缺少主語(yǔ)，先行詞為人，應(yīng)用who。

【6】has→had 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)By that time可知，此處表示過(guò)去的過(guò)去，故用過(guò)去完成時(shí)，故把has改為had。

【7】was→were 此處為非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主語(yǔ)which指代前面的works，復(fù)數(shù)，故was改為were。

【8】so→but 考查連接詞。畫廊要出高價(jià)買，但作者沒賣，故此處為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把so改為but。

【9】me后加of 考查固定搭配。remind sb of使某人想起……。

【10】paint→painting 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。前面是介詞by，后面接動(dòng)詞要用動(dòng)名詞形式。