假如你是李華,請(qǐng)代表全班同學(xué)給老師寫(xiě)一封信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:

課堂上您的微笑, 給了我們信心(confidence).

若您的課再生動(dòng),有趣些, 我們會(huì)更加喜歡您。

我們都很優(yōu)秀,希望得到您更多的表?yè)P(yáng)(praise)。

請(qǐng)多給我們一些建議,少一些命令。

您工作一向很努力,要學(xué)會(huì)休息,注意保重身體。

詞數(shù):100詞左右。用第一人稱(chēng)寫(xiě),開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear teacher,

As your student, I’d like to give you some suggestions on behalf of all my classmates.

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Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear teacher.

As your student , I'd like to give you some suggestions on behalf of all my classmates.

First , I want to say I love you. And I want to tell you that the smile on your face in English class gives us confidence. Then, we think we will love you more if you make your lessons more lively and more interesting. Also, we think that we are all excellent and hope to be more often praised by you. What’s more, we'd like you to give us some reasonable suggestions instead of orders. Finally, as you are always working very hard, it is quite important for you to learn to have a rest and take care of yourself.

Best wishes to you !

Yours.

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇書(shū)信寫(xiě)作,首先要注意格式規(guī)范和正確。開(kāi)頭要有稱(chēng)呼,結(jié)尾要落款。書(shū)信的內(nèi)容主要是表達(dá)對(duì)于對(duì)于老師的關(guān)系、感謝,以及對(duì)于老師的教學(xué)提出的建。因此感情要真切,表達(dá)要恰當(dāng),建議需中肯。時(shí)態(tài):用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯提升作文檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】第一段用would like to do sth ,想要做某事,直接說(shuō)明自己寫(xiě)這封信的目的。And I want to tell you that the smile on your face in English class gives us confidence.使用that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。Then, we think we will love you more if you make your lessons more lively and more interesting.使用if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句,對(duì)老師的工作提出合理的建議。Finally, as you are always working very hard, it is quite important for you to learn to have a rest and take care of yourself. 使用as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。在短語(yǔ)和詞組的運(yùn)用上面,What’s more,instead of,take care of,would like to do..等運(yùn)用,使得文章更加生動(dòng),表達(dá)明確。使用First,Then,Also,What’s more,F(xiàn)inally提出建議,使得文章條理清晰。

考點(diǎn):考查書(shū)信寫(xiě)作

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