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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

It was March 8th, Women’s Day. I decided to do something for my mom and give her a surprise.

Immediately after school, I went to the supermarket, when I bought plenty of vegetables, fish and meat. As soon as I arrived home, I started to prepare the dinner for Mom. It was the first time that I had cooked something on my own. Not knowing the exactly process to cook. I read some recipes first. Keep what I had learned in mind, I got down with cooking. Almost an hour later, three simple but delicious dishes were ready on the table.

Since Mom couldn’t get home until thirty minutes later, I started to do some cleaning. It was not difficult for me. Mopping thoroughly, the floor was quite clean.

No sooner had everything been ready Mom came back. I couldn’t wait to show what I had been done for her. A big smile with both surprise and satisfy spread on Mom’s face when she found the hearty(豐盛的) dinner and the tidy room. At that moment, pride rose from a bottom of my heart. Although she fell a little tired, everything was worthwhile.

Answer 1

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【解析】這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了作者為媽媽慶祝三八節(jié)的故事。

第一處：考查定語從句。句意：放學之后我立刻去了超市，在那里我購買了很多的蔬菜，魚和肉。先行詞為supermarket，在從句中做地點狀語，故應該用關系副詞where。

第二處：考查形容詞。修飾process名詞應該用形容詞exact，而不用副詞。

第三處：考查非謂語。句意：把我在書上學的東西牢記心間之后我就開始進行烹飪。此句謂語動詞為got，因此keep 應該是用非謂語，I 與keep之間為主動關系，所以應該用keeping。

第四處：考查固定短語。get down to doing“開始著手做某事”。故把with改為to。

第五處：考查非謂語。句意：徹底打掃之后，地板變得非常干凈。此句謂語為was，所以mop 用非謂語，mop 與the floor 之間為被動關系，所以要用過去分詞。

第六處：考查固定句型。no sooner… than…一……就……。句意：沒等一切準備就緒，媽媽就回來了。故Mom前加than。

第七處：考查語態(tài)。句意：我迫不及待的為她展示我做的一切。“我”與“做”是主動關系，所以had been done錯誤，要去掉been。

第八處：考查名詞。句意：媽媽臉上露出吃驚和滿意的笑容。both … and…表前后并列，詞性一致，surprise為名詞，因此satisfaction也用名詞。

第九處：考查冠詞。句意：那時候，自豪之情從自己心底油然而生。自己心底為特指，應該用the，不用a。

第十處：考查代詞。根據前后語境可知，此處表示“我雖然有點累，但感覺一切都值得”。是我不是她，所以用I 不用she。