【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

With the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become popular means of transport, bring great convenience to our life. Therefore, they have also caused some problems such as air pollutions and traffic jams.

How can we solve these problems then? As far as I am concerning, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmental friendly because of they won’t give off waste gas. Besides, riding bicycles was a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial for our health.

As a result, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join them.

【答案】第一處：在popular前面加a

第二處：bring→bringing

第三處：Therefore→However

第四處：pollutions→pollution

第五處：concerning →concerned

第六處：environmental→ environmentally

第七處：去掉of

第八處：was→is

第九處：for→to

第十處：them→us

【解析】

這是一篇議論文。文章主要講了隨著人們生活水平的提高，汽車已經(jīng)成為一種流行的交通工具，給我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。然而，它們也造成了一些問題，如空氣污染和交通堵塞。作者建議，騎自行車是一種很好的鍛煉方式。

第一處：考查冠詞。句意：隨著人們生活水平的提高，汽車已經(jīng)成為一種流行的交通工具，給我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。泛指“一種流行的交通工具”，popular首字母發(fā)音是輔音，所以在popular前面加a。

第二處：考查現(xiàn)在分詞。句意：隨著人們生活水平的提高，汽車已經(jīng)成為一種流行的交通工具，給我們的生活帶來了極大的便利�！捌嚒焙汀敖o我們的生活帶來了極大的便利”之間是主動關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，所以bring改成bringing。

第三處：考查副詞。句意：然而，它們也造成了一些問題，如空氣污染和交通堵塞。文中表示“然而”，所以Therefore改成However。

第四處：考查名詞。句意：然而，它們也造成了一些問題，如空氣污染和交通堵塞。pollution是不可數(shù)名詞，所以pollutions改成pollution。

第五處：考查固定短語。句意：就我而言，騎自行車是一個很好的解決辦法。as far as I am concerned就我而言，該短語是固定短語，所以concerning 改成concerned。

第六處：考查副詞。句意：另一方面，自行車是環(huán)保的，因為它們不會排放廢氣。修飾形容詞friendly，用副詞，所以environmental改成 environmentally。

第七處：考查常見用法。句意：另一方面，自行車是環(huán)保的，因為它們不會排放廢氣。because后面接句子，而because of后面接成分，這里接的是句子，所以去掉of。

第八處：考查時態(tài)。句意：此外，騎自行車是一種很好的鍛煉方式，它對我們的健康有益。 描述一個客觀的事實，用一般現(xiàn)在時，所以was改成is。

第九處：考查固定用法。句意：此外，騎自行車是一種很好的鍛煉方式，它對我們的健康有益。be beneficial to有益于，該用法是固定用法，所以for改成to。

第十處：考查代詞。句意：因此，讓我們通過騎自行車來承擔起建設(shè)低碳城市的責任。來加入我們吧。文中表示“來加入我們”，所以them改成us。

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