Question

6．Ann與Mary是同班同學(xué)．一天Ann拿了Mary的計(jì)算器沒有及時(shí)歸還，為此兩人發(fā)生了爭吵．Ann內(nèi)心很自責(zé)很后悔，不知道怎么辦，于是寫信告訴她的好友Lisa，尋求幫助．
假如你是Lisa，請(qǐng)按以下要求用英語給Ann寫封信：
1、談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法；     
2、給Ann提一些建議．
注意：字?jǐn)?shù)100-120，信的開頭和寫信人姓名已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：計(jì)算器----calculator         彌補(bǔ)----make up for         后悔；悔意----repentance（n．）

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇書信體作文．作文的主旨是：幫人解決困難．主要包括兩大方面的內(nèi)容：自己看法和建議．文章的重要短語都已經(jīng)提示出來了，而且要點(diǎn)比較齊，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫流暢就行了，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式． 同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides，further，Believe it or not等．在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．
As a good friend of yours，I can fully understand your repentance，not to mention that you didn't return the calculator borrowed from Mary in time．（高分句型一）
Since it has happened，I think what you are supposed to do first is to apologize to Mary rather than cry over spilt milk．（高分句型二）
I'm convinced that your friendship will be strengthened if both of you have a generous and forgiving heart．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Ann，
     I'm really sorry to have learned that you quarrelled with your classmate Mary the other day andhave no idea about how to make up for your relationship．As a good friend of yours，I can fully understand your repentance，not to mention that you didn't return the calculator borrowed from Mary in time．（高分句型一）
     Since it has happened，I think what you are supposed to do first is to apologize to Mary rather than cry over spilt milk．（高分句型二）Believe it or not，the courage to admit mistake will make her look at you with new respect．Besides，another thing worth remembering is to be a good listener to her in your communication and try to see things from her perspective．I'm convinced that your friendship will be strengthened if both of you have a generous and forgiving heart．（高分句型三）
Hope my suggestions do help．
Yours，
Lisa

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．