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The 6yearold kid watched in silence as the man behind the desk，the headmaster of the school，shook his head more than once to his mother．

Minutes later，mother and son walked slowly out of the school，her right hand holding his little hand，her left holding an umbrella to shield(遮擋) both of them from the sun．“Where are we going now，mother？”asked the kid，looking up at her．“To another school，”was her gentle reply．For some reason，the little kid had not been accepted by the school，and she was taking him to another，to try to get him registered．That was more than 50 years ago．That woman was my mother；that little kid was me．

Fifty years later，the day after my mother had slipped into a coma(昏迷) from a stroke，I sat next to her，holding her hand，stroking it，watching her body heaved up and down as she breathed heavily，as if she was struggling with something．Her eyes were closed，her mouth opened．I whispered softly to her，“Mum，it’s okay．You have given us everything．You can let go now．No need to struggle anymore，Mum．”

A few days later，Mum died．At her bedside，I spent some time just looking at my mother，soaking in the finality of her death．There she was，my mother，motionless and lifeless．I took hold of her still warm but lifeless hand，holding it for the last time，recalling every piece of the precious moment we spent together．

I finally let go of her hand—lifeless，yet having given so much life to so many of us，and placed it next to her body．I found myself saying silently to her the only words that came to my mind，“Goodbye Mum，thank you for everything．”

Thank you，Mother，for not giving up，so that I could go to school．Thank you for coaching me，for reading to me，for ironing my school uniforms，for combing my hair，for tying my shoe laces，for making sure I had a little handkerchief inside my pocket．．．

Rest in peace，Mother，you are still very much alive in us．Happy Mother’s Day．

寫作內(nèi)容

1．以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2．以約120詞對(duì)“母親對(duì)你的愛或者她對(duì)你成長(zhǎng)的影響”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)描述你的母親；

(2)簡(jiǎn)述她對(duì)你的影響；

(3)你準(zhǔn)備怎樣表達(dá)對(duì)她的感激之情。

寫作要求

1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

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概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。

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