【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請您修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜錢（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只充許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Wang Ming and I lived in the same building and we went to the same school. We always went to school together. We were good friend and had a great deal to share with every day. However, one day，Wang Ming copied my homework, which made me such angry that I did not want to be friends with him any long. Then on Monday morning I ran downstairs without realize it was raining, but there was no time to return home fetch an umbrella. It happens that Wang Ming was just around the corner and he offered to share her umbrella with me. He made an apology to me in a gently voice. I forgave him but gave him a hug.

【答案】

【1】friend→friends

【2】去掉with

【3】such→so

【4】long→longer

【5】realize→realizing

【6】fetch前加to

【7】happens→happened

【8】her→his

【9】gently→gentle

【10】but→and

【解析】

試題分析：本文講述了作者和王明由好朋友到鬧翻再到和好的故事。

【1】friend→friends 句意：我們是好朋友。根據(jù)句意可知此處名詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把friend改成friends。

【2】去掉with 句意：有許多要分享的。此處并不表示“與某人分享”，故去掉with。

【3】such→so angry是形容詞，應(yīng)用so來修飾，故把such改成so。

【4】long→longer not...any longer不再，故把long改成longer。

【5】realize→realizing 介詞without后面用動(dòng)名詞，故把realize改成realizing。

【6】fetch前加to 此處是動(dòng)詞不定式表示目的狀語，故在fetch前加to。

【7】happens→happened 句意：碰巧王明正在角落附近。根據(jù)句意可知用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，故把happens改成happened。

【8】her→his 句意：他讓我和他分享他的雨傘。根據(jù)句意可知把her改成his。

【9】gently→gentle 形容詞修飾名詞，故把gently改成gentle。

【10】but→and 句意：我原諒了他并給了他一個(gè)擁抱。故把but改成and。

【知識拓展】

英語so和such用法有什么區(qū)別

1、so + 形容詞/副詞 + that + 從句,如：This story is so interesting that I want to read it again.這個(gè)故事如此有趣以至我想再讀一次.

He spoke so quickly that I couldn't follow him.他說得如此快以至我不能跟上他.

2、so+形容詞/副詞+(a/an)+(單數(shù))復(fù)數(shù)可數(shù)名詞／+that+從句,如果句中的名詞是單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞,其前就要用a或an,如果是復(fù)數(shù)可數(shù)名詞或者,前面就不用,如：She is so lovely a girl that every she她是如此可愛的一個(gè)女孩,以至每個(gè)人都喜歡她.

3、such+a/an+形容詞+單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞+that+從句,如：It is such an interesting story that I want to read it again.這是一個(gè)如此有趣的故事以至我想再讀一次.

4、such+復(fù)數(shù)可數(shù)名詞/+that+從句,如：He showed such concern that people took him to be a relative.他表現(xiàn)得如此關(guān)心以致于人們都把他當(dāng)作親戚了.

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