Question

請結(jié)合材料，按照要求用英文寫作，詞數(shù)不少于60。

In your English class，you are asked to describe this picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it．
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Answer 1

There stands a tall tree in which there is a beautiful house called the city’s primary school. Under it, five little birds, on whose backs are written five characters which mean “children of off-farm workers”, are sitting on the ground, with their eyes looking at the house well above. How they want to fly into the house, but their wings are too weak.
As we know, a lot of off-farm workers come to cities to earn their living. They try their best to serve the city, but they can’t afford the expensive schooling for their children.
I hope there will be enough schools for the off-farm workers’ children; this way we can enjoy a better life together.

試題分析：這是一篇漫畫類作文。首先要看懂漫畫的內(nèi)容，然后要分析其深層含義。需要注意緊扣文章主題，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。注意要求的詞數(shù)詞數(shù)不少于60。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】There stands a tall tree in which there is a beautiful house called the city’s primary school.這個句子含有一個定語從句；Under it, five little birds, on whose backs are written five characters which mean “children of off-farm workers”, are sitting on the ground, with their eyes looking at the house well above.這個句子含有兩個定語從句。