Question

19．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤．對標題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．
此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
注意：原行沒有錯的不要改．
I'd love to tell you something about my vacation．I've been（76）√looking forward to visit the East Lake for a long time，（77）visitingYesterday，with my friends，I paid a visit it．We set off at（78）to7：00 am by bus．It is 8 kilometers far away from our city，and（79）去掉farwhen we got there，it was 7：20 am．There we have a wonderful （80）hadtime．We spent the whole morning boating sand fished on the lake．（81）finishingThen we had a picnic by the lake．On the afternoon，we climbed（82）Inthe Snake Island，picking the beautiful flowers and took a lot of pictures（83）picked Time passed very quick．Before we knew it，it was already 16：00，（84）quicklybut we had to go back．How about your vacation？Please write to（85）andme as soon as possible．

Answer 1

分析 短文講述了作者在假期的一次旅行．作者與朋友們一起去了距離市區(qū)8公里的東湖，他們花了一上午的時間劃船，釣魚，還在湖邊進行野餐；下午他們爬了蛇島在蛇島上摘花，拍照，一直到了下午四點多才返回．作者和朋友們度過了愉快的一天．

解答 I'd love to tell you something about my vacation．I've been （76）√
looking forward to visit the East Lake for a long time，（77）visiting
Yesterday，with my friends，I paid a visit∧it．We set off at    （78）to
7：00 am by bus．It is 8 kilometers far away from our city，and   （79）去掉far
when we got there，it was 7：20 am．There we have a wonderful   （80）had
time．We spent the whole morning boatings and fishedon the lake．  （81）finishing
Then we had a picnic by the lake．On the afternoon，we climbed   （82）In
the Snake Island，picking the beautiful flowers and took a lot of pictures   （83）picked 
 Time passed very quick．Before we knew it，it was already 16：00，（84）quickly
but we had to go back．How about your vacation？Please write to   （85）and
me as soon as possible．
76．√
77．visit改為visiting；考查固定短語搭配，look forward to中to是介詞，后面跟名詞或動名詞．
78．visit后面加to；考查固定短語搭配，pay a visit to后接地點，表示"去某地參觀，旅游"．
79．去掉far；考查固定搭配，It is 8 kilometers away from our city意為"它距離我們的城市8公里遠"，當away前面有具體的數(shù)字時，要去掉far．
80．have改為had；考查動詞的時態(tài)，短文講的是假期發(fā)生的事情，所以要用過去時態(tài)．
81．finished改為finishing；考查并列結構，用finishing和and前面的boating構成并列結構，在句中作狀語．
82．On改為In；考查介詞，"在下午"要用"in the afternoon"，這是固定用法．
83．picking改為picked；考查動詞的時態(tài)，這里用picked和前面的climbed以及后面的took構成并列結構，并列作句子的謂語．
84．quick改為quickly；考查副詞，句中需要修飾的是動詞passed，所以要用副詞形式．
85．but改為and；考查連詞，結合上下文句意，這里應當是并列關系而不是轉折，故用and．

點評 在短文改錯當中，首先要從整體掌握短文大意，結合上下文語境并充分運用平時掌握的基礎知識，充分運用所學的基礎知識，包括一些實詞和虛詞的用法，固定短語搭配，習慣性用法，結合上下文整體關系，找出錯誤并加以修正．