Question

【題目】書面表達

假設你是李華，是校英語俱樂部的成員。英語俱樂部下次交流的話題是My Hero，請你寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿，介紹你班身殘志堅的同學——王躍。內容包括：

1. 他不能正常地走路； 2. 他對待生活和學習的態(tài)度； 3. 你敬佩他的原因。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear friends,

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That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear friends,

My name is Li Hua. I would like to share my hero with you, one of my classmates named Wang Yue.

When Wang Yue was born, he suffered from a rare disease, which made him unable to walk normally. As a result, he has to sit in a wheelchair all day. However, Wang Yue stays positive about life. He works hard at his lessons because he has a big dream. His ambition is to become a scientist when he grows up.

Wang Yue is my hero because he never gives up his dream although he has a physical disability. His example inspires us to try our best to make our dream come true.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要仔細審題，包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結構，（2）句子的時態(tài)（3）內容要點。尤其是內容要點要把握準確到位，這是提綱作文，要點需要考生拿捏準確以及正確，考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒壘涫胶透呒壴~匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。因為只能使用120個詞表達全部的內容。又要包括所有的要點，考生要多使用復雜句，一句話中多包含些信息。

【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：share sth with sb和某人分享某事，suffered from遭受，As a result結果，inspire激勵，come true實現(xiàn)，which made him unable to walk normally.是一句定語從句，His ambition is to become a scientist when he grows up.是一句時間狀語從句。