Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏子符號（^）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

A girl called Jennifer left home three days before. She wandered about in the streets, tiring and hungry. She could no longer bear it, but she made up her mind to return home. On her way back to home, she was wondering how her parents would react after the three day of her disappearance. Returned home, she saw note lying on the table in the kitchen room. Her father sat in the sofa. Her mother was so tired that she slept soundly. Instead of waking her, Jennifer lay beside her mother and go to sleep soon. When she was awake, she found she wasn’t in her mother’s room and her old and dirty clothes was gone. She was in her own comfortable and warm bed in his sleeping clothes.

Kate

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】before---ago

【2】tiring---tired

【3】but---so

【4】去掉to

【5】day---days

【6】Returned---Returning

【7】saw后面加上a

【8】go---went

【9】was---were

【10】his---her

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇故事類的文章，講述了女孩離家出走想要看看爸爸媽媽會有什么表現(xiàn)，最終回到家里的故事。

【1】before---ago 考查固定結構。描述幾天以前用ago，three days ago意思是三天以前，故改為ago.

【2】tiring---tired 考查形容詞。這里是形容人疲憊應用-ed形式的，故改為tired。

【3】but---so 考查連詞。根據(jù)前后兩句構成的因果關系，可知應該用so,故改為so。

【4】去掉to 考查固定用法。Home前面不能加to，故去掉to。

【5】day---days考查單復數(shù)。Three表示復數(shù)，故改為days。

【6】Returned---Returning考查動名詞。Return和she之間構成主動關系，故改為Returning。

【7】saw后面加上a 考查冠詞。Note是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)形式，且首字母沒有元音發(fā)音，故在saw后面加上a。

【8】go---went 考查時態(tài)。全文都是用一般過去時的，故改為went。

【9】was---were 考查單復數(shù)。dirty clothes表示復數(shù)，后面應用復數(shù)形式的be動詞，故改為were。

【10】his---her考查物主代詞。這里的主語是女的，所以應該是女的她的，故改為her。