Question

寫(xiě)作 (共1小題；滿分30分)
我們學(xué)校將要舉辦一次主題為“What Can We Do for Our School”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。要求從以下幾個(gè)方面進(jìn)行闡述：
1. 尊敬他人
2. 美化校園（campus）
3. 愛(ài)護(hù)學(xué)校設(shè)施（facilities）
4. 營(yíng)造良好的學(xué)習(xí)氛圍（environment）
注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)120-150；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Hello, everyone, it’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something……
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Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

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What Can We Do for Our School
Hello, everyone. It's nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us
can do something. The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful.
Every one of us may plant a tree in the school, or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.
We can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan.
The second thing we can do is to protect the facilities in our school. When we leave the
classroom, we should never forget to turn off the light or close the door. We should not leave
the tap water running or waste any materials in the laboratory class.
If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better placeto study and live in.
Thank you for listening!

解析試題分析：演講稿首先要開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，既要一下子抓住聽(tīng)眾，又要提出你自己的觀點(diǎn)，中間要用各種方法和所準(zhǔn)備的材料說(shuō)明、支持你的觀點(diǎn)，感染聽(tīng)眾，然后在結(jié)尾強(qiáng)調(diào)說(shuō)明觀點(diǎn)或得出結(jié)論，結(jié)束演講。要注意動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，說(shuō)的句子要符合演講的語(yǔ)氣。演講稿還要在情緒上具有較強(qiáng)的感染力，語(yǔ)言上做到生動(dòng)感人。在沒(méi)有時(shí)間限制的情況下，盡量做到短而精，在聽(tīng)眾的精力分散前戛然而止，余味悠長(zhǎng)。演講中為達(dá)到感召力和鼓動(dòng)性，還往往運(yùn)用一些特定句式，如祈使句、感嘆句、反意疑問(wèn)句、設(shè)問(wèn)句、排比句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫(xiě)演講稿的話，注意少用長(zhǎng)句子，多用表達(dá)順暢讀起來(lái)瑯瑯上口的語(yǔ)句會(huì)比較容易記得住，不容易忘詞。稿子要背的很熟，注意語(yǔ)音語(yǔ)調(diào)，吐字發(fā)音，手勢(shì)動(dòng)作自然，眼神有交流，讓人感覺(jué)你是在說(shuō)話而不是背書(shū)。做到整場(chǎng)演講的音調(diào)有高低起伏、節(jié)奏有輕重緩急、情緒有高漲有低潮，波瀾起伏、收舒有度。因此，選詞時(shí)要注意詞語(yǔ)的正式程度。一些口語(yǔ)化過(guò)重的詞，如well, yeah, gonna, wanna, gotta, alas, O.K ,all right, Good, 都不大適宜使用。