Question

假設你是李華，你收到在美國的姑母的一封電子郵件，說你剛上大學的表哥染上了抽煙的習慣。你姑母很擔心他的健康，請你給你的表哥寫一封電子郵件，勸他戒煙。
寫作內(nèi)容
1、吸煙既浪費錢又致病，甚至能引起致命性疾��；
2、吸煙對周圍的人也有害，會影響同學、朋友間的關系；
3、在宿舍（dormitory）吸煙如不注意會引起火災；
4、為了自己和他人，盡早戒煙。
寫作要求
1、必須用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容；
2、電子郵件的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總句數(shù)。
Dear Wang Lin,
Congratulations on you entering the university. How are you getting on?  ______________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Wang Lin,
Congratulations on your entering the university. How are you getting on? I was shocked to hear that you got into the habit of smoking. As we know, smoking not only wastes a lot of money, but also result in many diseases, even deadly ones. Since smoking does harms to you yourself and others around you, it may have a bad effect on the relationship betwee you and them. Besides, if you don’t smoke in the dormitory with care, it may cause a fire. For the sake of yourself and others, you should quit smoking as soon as you can.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查提綱類作文，本文是要向表哥介紹吸煙的危害，給出大部分的要點。本文的難點在于選擇合適的詞匯把文字提示的內(nèi)容表達出來，同時要注意選擇合適的連接詞把各要點連接起來。也要使用多變的句式讓文章充滿變化，不要過于死板。
點評：本文是要向表哥介紹吸煙的危害。對考生的謀篇布局的能力要求較高，要合理的分布各個要點，用適當?shù)倪B接詞來連接成流暢的短文。在選擇詞匯時要注意選擇一些相對高級的詞匯讓文章的層次更高。