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13．假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的張紅，將參加主題為"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英語演講比賽．請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題．
2．騎自行車的益處，如能環(huán)保，有利健康等．
3．我的個人觀點(diǎn)…
參考詞匯：低碳生活：low-carbon life  環(huán)境：environment
保護(hù)：protect  健康：health  污染 pollution
注意：1．詞數(shù)：80--100 詞左右；
4．演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，請將其抄寫在答題卡上且該部分不計入總詞數(shù)．
Good morning，everyone，
I am Zhang Hong from Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles
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Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文中常見的演講稿．話題是號召同學(xué)多騎自行車．有很強(qiáng)的可寫性，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了，但只是一個提綱，考生還需要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮．在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次．同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second，Besides，What's more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢．本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔的表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】所給范文開頭緊扣題目，起到了開篇點(diǎn)題的作用．As is known to all，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transport，bringing great convenience to our life．這句話用了定語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving．bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas．這句話用了動名詞做主語．另外文章中上下文的銜接句成了本范文的一個亮點(diǎn)，F(xiàn)or one thing，F(xiàn)or another，What's more，等的使用使文章渾然一體．

解答 Good morning，everyone，
I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．
As is known to all，with the improvement of people's living standards，cars have become a popular means of transport，bringing great convenience to our life．（高分句型）However，they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams．
How can we solve the problems then？As far as I'm concerned，riding bicycles is a good solution．（高分句型）For one thing，bicycles don't need any petrol and they are energy-saving．For another，bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won't give off waste gas．（高分句型）What's more，riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health．（高分句型）
Therefore，let's take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles．Come on and join us!
Thank you!

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．