Question

【題目】假定你是李華，王平約你本周日一同參加同學(xué)黎明的十八歲生日聚會(huì)，但你有以下幾件事情不明白，輕用英語寫給王平一封電子郵件進(jìn)行詢問。

1. 地點(diǎn)及開始時(shí)間；

2. 交通方式；

3. 準(zhǔn)備禮物；

4. 安排及結(jié)束時(shí)間。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右（已給出的開頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Wang Ping，

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Ping,

I’m very happy to go with you to Li Ming’s 18th birthday party, but I have something unclear to ask. Please tell me when it begins and when it ends. Where is it to be held? How shall we go to the party, by bus or by bike? Would you let me know who else will be at the party? A birthday gift has been a tradition for a happy birthday. What do you have in mind if we want to get him a nice gift? Also, I’d like to know how he plans the party. Any dance, singing, games or anything else? Anyway, all that counts is to have fun at the party.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題解析：書信類文體需要注意開頭的問候和結(jié)尾的祝福，本篇是接受邀請(qǐng)寫回信詢問細(xì)節(jié)，結(jié)構(gòu)上，首先要表達(dá)感謝邀請(qǐng)之意或者收到邀請(qǐng)的心情高興happy或者榮幸honor，接著表現(xiàn)自己的疑惑，然后就具體的問題進(jìn)行詢問，在詢問時(shí)注意詢問的邏輯，注意不要一直用I作主語開頭避免單調(diào)�？梢赃m當(dāng)使用一些插入語，比如by the way,in addition,otherwhile時(shí)態(tài)：主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)亮點(diǎn)說明：在詢問具體的細(xì)節(jié)時(shí)，不斷的變換句式，先祈使句，再換用疑問句，后用陳述句來避免詢問的單調(diào)。Please tell me when it begins and when it ends.運(yùn)用兩個(gè)賓語從句，將對(duì)生日會(huì)起始時(shí)間的詢問用祈使句問出。A birthday gift has been a tradition for a happy birthday.這句話以禮物為主語，采用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)用be a traditionfor sth.的結(jié)構(gòu)，作為鋪墊，從連續(xù)的詢問生日會(huì)的安排過渡到禮物的選擇。 What do you have in mind if we want to get him a nice gift? 運(yùn)用了條件狀語從句。Anyway, all that counts is to have fun at the party.運(yùn)用了主語從句，是對(duì)問詢的一個(gè)總結(jié)。