Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）

內(nèi)容要求：1. 描述漫畫的內(nèi)容；
2.舉例說明子女能為父母做些什么；
3、發(fā)表個(gè)人感想。
注意：
可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；
詞數(shù)120左右；
文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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Answer 1

One possible version:
It is the old man’s birthday today. Now he is sitting on a sofa alone. Maybe his wife has been dead. On the right side is a big birthday cake sent by his son. And there are also some presents given by his daughter on the left. Yet the old man doesn’t feel happy. Instead, he looks very sad because he is lonely.
Our life is getting better and better than before. Some people think that old people will be satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink. I think they are quite wrong. Old people easily get lonely because they have no work to do. So we should spend as much time together with them as we can and take care of them in every possible way.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，談?wù)摰氖亲优�能為父母做些什么。寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
點(diǎn)評：看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達(dá)出來，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過程、結(jié)果這六個(gè)要素；如果是說明文或議論文，考生則首先要對圖畫的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進(jìn)行說明或議論。此時(shí)考生一定要注意把握圖畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內(nèi)容。