Question

【題目】請閱讀下面短文， 并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

You may not have noticed it , but every time you are very hungry, you tend to get angry much more easily and for no reason. You are getting “hungry”, which is “the phenomenon whereby some people get short-tempered when they’re longing for a feed”, CNN noted.

According to Health, the lower blood sugar stops the brain from working properly. As a result, we may feel ineffective and angry.

What we eat will provide the nutrients for our bloodstream. Then they are given to our organs and tissues and used for energy.

But if we are hungry, the nutrients will drop rapidly. And if they drop enough, our brain will think that it is in a life-threatening situation and cannot focus on its job. So you will find it’s hard to work or study efficiently and keep a peaceful mind.

Scientists advise to “carry healthy snacks with you---like fruit, and yogurt---so that when you are hungry, they will hold you over until the next meal.”

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1、用30個單詞概括上述短文內(nèi)容。

2、用120個左右單詞來發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：

談?wù)勀闳绾慰创�吃零食的現(xiàn)象，并用2-3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的觀點(diǎn)。

（寫作要求）

1、寫作過程中不可直接引用原文語句；

2、作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3、不必寫標(biāo)題。

（評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】People tend to get angry when hungry, which is due to lower blood sugar caused by lack of nutrients. A solution is put forward that healthy snacks should be carried.

From my point of view, eating snacks with nutritious choices that feed people’s bodies the nutrients is a must. On one hand, as we know, three meals a day is best. But after understanding the body better, we find a drop in blood sugar can be triggered by going for long stretches between meals. That drop not only causes overeating at meal time , but also transforms a person easily into a cranky monster. On the other hand, some snacks are high in fat or sugar. Obesity as well as various diseases can result from taking too much fat .Only by eating low-calorie snacks with rich nutrients can those who want to keep fit and take control of their weight benefit.

【解析】

本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)。

要求我們就所給出的一段材料寫一篇作文。仍然屬于議論文，可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時和第三人稱。在此文中應(yīng)當(dāng)使用第一人稱來寫。議論文是比較容易的文體，提出一個主題，對這個主題展開討論。對于這類文體宜采用三段式文章，第一段首先確定主題，而在這篇文章中主題已經(jīng)給出，只需要對題目中所給出的段落進(jìn)行概括總結(jié)；第二段可以結(jié)合文章的提示與要求說出你自己的想法，并對其進(jìn)行說明；第三段通過題目所給的要求舉一個例子即可，中間需要運(yùn)用上表起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞、定語從句、倒裝等語法現(xiàn)象使文章富有深度、句式多變。

一、概括原文內(nèi)容需要注意的是：

1. 要求：簡潔明了、主題突出、控制字?jǐn)?shù)。

2. 方法：

1) 確定主題句。2).尋找關(guān)鍵詞。3).重構(gòu)主題句。4). 重組支撐句（用自己單的語言解釋比較復(fù)雜的語言文字，不能抄襲原文）。

二、寫自己觀點(diǎn)時的注意事項：

1. 觀點(diǎn)明確、層次清晰、有理有據(jù)。

2. 方法：

1）緊扣文章主題。2）注意使用高級的詞匯與高級的句型。3）總分結(jié)構(gòu)。