Question

假如你是李華, Jane 是美國人。在她暑假來中國游玩時你們相識,并成為好朋友。Jane回國后,你很想念她,于是給她寫了一封信,并且和她談了你對高一新生活的感受。信頭信尾均已給出；詞數(shù)100左右。
Dear Jane,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Jane,
How’s everything going? I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I entered senior high school in September. The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them. Of course, I will also do more exercise to keep fit.
Give my best regards to your parents and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：本文是篇材料作文, 內(nèi)容是Jane 是美國人。在她暑假來中國游玩時你們相識,并成為好朋友。Jane回國后,你很想念她,于是給她寫了一封信,并且和她談了你對高一新生活的感受。時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱以第一人稱為主。字?jǐn)?shù)要求100詞左右。所以要求根據(jù)個人理解說明原因和保護(hù)視力的措施。還應(yīng)該注意使用較高級的詞匯和句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如full of challenges，keep fit，look forward to，還運(yùn)用了賓語從句； 非謂語作狀語等等。并注意了句子變化和句子之間的銜接如：and thus，Of course等等。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。