Question

假設(shè)你是李華，是我校一位高二學(xué)生。最近你收到來自友好學(xué)校朋友Tom的邀請(qǐng)，請(qǐng)你下個(gè)周去他們學(xué)校參加文化交流活動(dòng)并介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)繪畫。但是你和其他高二學(xué)生一樣在忙于準(zhǔn)備期末考試，不得不謝絕他的邀請(qǐng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)給Tom用英語寫一封回信。

要點(diǎn)：  1. 謝絕Tom的邀請(qǐng)；

        2. 說明你的理由；

        3. 推薦你的同學(xué)Mary參加，并說明原因。

注意：  1．詞數(shù)為100左右；

        2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

       3. 信的開頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入你所寫詞數(shù)）。

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation.                                              

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Best wishes.

                                                                          Yours sincerely,

                                                                          Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation.

I’d like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t. The reason is that I, together with my classmates, am busy preparing myself for the coming final examination.

I strongly recommend my friend Mary, who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week. She began to learn painting at an early age and has a good knowledge of traditional Chinese painting, which, combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help make your activity a success.

Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.

Best wishes.

                                                            Yours sincerely,

                                                             Li Hua

 

【解析】

試題分析：考查書信類作文的寫法，書信類作文要注意格式，包括稱呼，正文，祝賀語，署名等，正文部分要根據(jù)所給的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清楚，不能遺漏，這篇書信的要點(diǎn)包括： 謝絕Tom的邀請(qǐng)；說明你的理由；推薦你的同學(xué)Mary參加，并說明原因。注意用地道的英語表達(dá)，可適當(dāng)使用高級(jí)句型和高級(jí)詞匯，如范文里的句子She began to learn painting at an early age and has a good knowledge of traditional Chinese painting, which, combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help make your activity a success. 是個(gè)難度很大的復(fù)雜句。因?yàn)橐�點(diǎn)只是個(gè)提綱，具體的內(nèi)容要考生加入，使文章充實(shí)，比如理由部分，要寫的讓人可以接受，合情合理，這也給這篇書信增加了難度。

考點(diǎn); 考查書信類作文的寫法

點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是封回信，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)對(duì)來信一一做出解答很重要，注意遣詞造句，不能受漢語影響。