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【題目】書面表達(dá)

隨著中國經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，私家車日漸增多，很多學(xué)生上學(xué)都有車接送，為此，同學(xué)之間觀點(diǎn)不一。請你根據(jù)下表中雙方不同觀點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇文章給上海英文星報(bào)--Shanghai Star ，介紹這種情況及你對這一現(xiàn)象的看法。

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1.省時(shí)、方便； 2.安全。	1.擁堵、車禍； 2.易相互攀比。
你的看法……

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書面表達(dá)

In recent years, more and more students go to school in private cars. People have different opinions about this phenomenon.

Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years, more and more students go to school in private cars. People have different opinions about this phenomenon

Some people favor taking private cars because it is safer and much more time-saving than taking other means of transportation. In this sense, going to school in a private car is more convenient.

However, other people argue that too many private cars will cause traffic jams and even accidents during the rush hour. What’s worse, students tend to vie with each other to show they are from rich families by taking expensive cars.

In my opinion, students may have other options, such as buses, and bicycles. Private cars are surely more convenient, but as a student, I prefer riding a bicycle. By doing so, I won’t do any harm to the environment while improving my health.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是寫一篇文章，關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，本文的主題是對很多學(xué)生上學(xué)都有車接送這一現(xiàn)象表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)，考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系。靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】學(xué)生寫作要有靈活性，同時(shí)要表現(xiàn)出較好的英語語言表達(dá)能力。本文脈絡(luò)清晰，首先闡述了支持私家車接送的觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述反對接送的觀點(diǎn)，最后闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)齊全，有理有據(jù)。文章使用了很好的短語和句子：time-saving節(jié)省時(shí)間， traffic jams交通堵塞， What’s worse更糟糕的是, tend to趨向， vie with與...比較、競爭， In my opinion在我看來，do harm to 對...造成危害。uIn this sense, going to school in a private car is more convenient.是主語從句，However, other people argue that too many private cars will cause traffic jams是賓語從句，What’s worse, students tend to vie with each other to show they are from rich families by taking expensive cars.句子很出彩。