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2．假如你是大學(xué)一年級(jí)新生李華．開學(xué)之初，你的英語老師Ms Li希望了解每位同學(xué)的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征求教學(xué)建議．請(qǐng)按以下要點(diǎn)用英語給她寫一封信．
1．對(duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)；
2．自己目前的英語水平；
3．自己英語學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問題；
4．對(duì)英語教學(xué)的兩點(diǎn)建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出．
Dear Ms Li，
I'm very happy to have you asour English teacher．As the world is becoming a global village，English isgetting more and more important，so mastering English means we can see theworld through a new window．
My English is just OK and the two mainproblems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，andthat I often feel nervous when speaking English．I really hope that youcan give me good advice on how to memorize new words．Another suggestion is togive us more chances to practice speaking．I believe we can make much progressin English with your help．．
Thank you!
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫一封信給英語老師，告知自己的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況．要點(diǎn)包括：對(duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)；自己目前的英語水平；自己英語學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問題，對(duì)英語教學(xué)的兩點(diǎn)建議．寫作時(shí)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．重要短語：learn words by heart （用心背單詞），feel nervous （覺得緊張），give sb good advice on （給某人關(guān)于…的建議），chances to do sth （做某事的機(jī)會(huì)），make much progress （取得很大進(jìn)展），memorize new words （記憶新單詞）．

解答 Dear Ms Li，
      I'm very happy to have you as our Englishteacher．As the world is becoming a global village，English is getting more andmore important，so mastering English means we can see the world through a newwindow．【高分句型】（對(duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)）
      My English is just OK （自己目前的英語水平） and the two main problemsin my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart，and that Ioften feel nervous when speaking English．【高分句型】（自己英語學(xué)習(xí)存在的問題）I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize newwords．Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking．Ibelieve we can make much progress in English with your help．（對(duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的建議）
                                                    Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．