Question

11．假定你是李華，你的朋友李明寫信告訴你他因不善交友而苦惱，感覺在日常學(xué)習(xí)生活中缺乏和同學(xué)之間的交流，請根據(jù)下面提示給他回信，提出建議．
提示：
1．友善、樂于助人；
2．多與他人交流，尋找自己的知心朋友；
3．多參加學(xué)校組織的各種活動．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使短文連貫．
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Li Ming，
I'm sorry to hear that
                                                      
Yours，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們給不善于交友而苦惱的李明回信，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：友善、樂于助人；多與他人交流；多參加活動．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為交友的建議．第二部分為作者的美好祝愿．
重點短語與句型：
be helpful to 對…有益
be faithful to 忠誠于
develop a good friendship培養(yǎng)好的友誼
get along well with 相處的好
高分句型一：First，be kind，friendly and polite to others and always ready to help others，through which you'll get well paid..此句用了介詞加關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)定語從句
高分句型二：Besides，it is also very important that friends should be faithful to each other．此句用了it 做形式主語，真正主語為that從句．

解答 Dear Li Ming，
        I'm sorry to hear you're feeling worried for failing to make friends．Some tips below may be helpful to you．First，be kind，friendly and polite to others and always ready to help others，through which you'll get well paid．（高分句型一）Second，try to communicate with others more，for it helps strengthen your ties with friends and lots of misunderstandings can be avoided．Third，take an active part in activities，such as sports，games，travels，parties，etc．This way，you'll get more chances to communicate with others．Besides，it is also very important that friends should be faithful to each other．（高分句型二）（ 交友的建議）
         Anyhow，there're many ways to develop a good friendship．Hope you'll get along well with your friends．（作者的美好祝愿）
         Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．