Question

目前地球面臨水資源危機， 請你以Global Shortage of Fresh Water 為題，根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文。

提示：1. 人們以為淡水是取之不盡的（雨水，河水，井水……）

2. 實際上淡水是非常緊缺的（人口增加，工業(yè)用水增加，污染……）

3. 人類應該怎么辦？

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Global Shortage of Fresh Water

Many people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up. They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use. Such an opinion leads to shocking waste of water.

As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water. Furthermore, with rapid growth of the world’s population, the rising demand for water by industry, and the serious pollution of our surroundings, the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water. Actually, in some big cities, fresh water cannot meet the daily needs.

Therefore, to find new ways to save water is an urgent task. First, we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water. Second, scientists must work even harder to purify sea water and polluted water, and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫的內(nèi)容大部分已經(jīng)給出，在“人類應該怎么辦？”這一部分進行展開，要通過嚴格的法律，科學家要努力進行海水的淡化等等。寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談談自己的看法。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數(shù)，不要太多也不要太少。

考點：提綱作文

點評：本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。