Question

8．與很多國家一樣，美國也比較缺乏淡水，尤其是在春夏季節(jié)．根據(jù)一項調(diào)查表明，美國的淡水使用分布情況如下面的圖表所示．請根據(jù)圖表，寫一篇調(diào)查報告．

注意：1．短文必須包括圖表的內(nèi)容；
2．詞數(shù)100左右．
參考詞匯：consumptive adj．消費的　thermo power熱能　livestock n．家畜．
From the graph，we can see that most of the fresh water in the US has been used to irrigate the fields，which accounts for 82 percent of all．While the rest，about 18 percent in all，is used in domestic daily life，industry，livestock，commerce，thermo power and mining，among which domestic use of fresh water has the biggest percentage，accounting for about 7 percent．The use of fresh water in livestock，industry and thermo power is equally 3 percent，taking the third place，and commercial and mining use of fresh water accounts for the least，only 1 per cent．
America has the most developed agriculture and so consumes the biggest share of freshwater．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
From the graph，we can see that most of the fresh water in the US has been used to irrigate the fields，which accounts for 82 percent of all
從圖中我們可以看到，在美國最新鮮的水被用來灌溉農(nóng)田，占了82%．
高分句型二：
The use of fresh water in livestock，industry and thermo power is equally 3 percent，taking the third place，and commercial and mining use of fresh water accounts for the least，only 1 per cent．
淡水家畜的使用，工業(yè)和火電平均是3%，以第三的地方，和淡水占最小的商業(yè)開采使用，只有1個百分點．

解答 From the graph，we can see that most of the fresh water in the US has been used to irrigate the fields，which accounts for 82 percent of all（高分句型一）．While the rest，about 18 percent in all，is used in domestic daily life，industry，livestock，commerce，thermo power and mining，among which domestic use of fresh water has the biggest percentage，accounting for about 7 percent．The use of fresh water in livestock，industry and thermo power is equally 3 percent，taking the third place，and commercial and mining use of fresh water accounts for the least，only 1 per cent（高分句型二）．
America has the most developed agriculture and so consumes the biggest share of freshwater．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．