Question

【題目】假定你是劉明，剛剛以?xún)?yōu)異成績(jī)從美國(guó)某大學(xué)畢業(yè)。你的的美國(guó)朋友Tony邀請(qǐng)你去他的公司工作，但是你想回國(guó)工作。請(qǐng)給Tony寫(xiě)一封郵件婉拒他的邀請(qǐng)。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：

1.報(bào)效祖國(guó)；

2.照顧父母；

3.發(fā)展空間大。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tony,

Thanks for offering me a job in your company, but I have decided to go back to work in China.

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Yours,

Liu Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony

Thanks for offering me a job in your company ,but I hav decided to go back to work in China. The reasons are as follows.

Firstly ,I’m a Chinese and I love my coutry . I feel it my duty to devote all I have learned in America to my motherland to make it stronger. Secondly my parents are aging, so , as their only sone. I need to be with them and take good care of them. Besides , China is developing very fast, which offers more opportunities for me to build my career. Lastly ,most of my friends and classmates work in China, that is , it is easier for me to live and work in a familiar environment.

I would appreciate it if you can understand my choice. Wish you a splendid future.

Yours

Lihua

【解析】試題分析：考查提綱類(lèi)作文寫(xiě)作，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)短語(yǔ)：as follows如下； feel it my duty to感覺(jué)做某事是我的責(zé)任； take good care of照顧； offer me a job提供給某人某物。I feel it my duty to devote all I have learned in America to my motherland to make it stronger.這個(gè)句子中I have learned in America做的是all的定語(yǔ)從句，to make it stronger.做目的狀語(yǔ)。Besides , China is developing very fast, which offers more opportunities for me to build my career.這個(gè)句子中which引導(dǎo)的是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。I would appreciate it if you can understand my choice.這外句子中考查 I would appreciate it if …..如果你做某事我將不勝感激。