Question

【題目】文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤, 每句最多兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在橫線(xiàn)下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear Jack,

I was sorry to hear that you are suffering from short-sightedness.

To be frank, almost eight students out ten in my class have to wear glasses to live a normal school life, include me. Many factors contribute to this phenomenon. First, us Chinese students who live under a great burden of examinations. We have to fight our way in life with millions of peers. Second, most of us with short-sightedness don’t have a good habit of using our eye, due to neither lack of knowledge of protecting eyes or carelessness.

In this case, I strong recommend that you not use your computer for such long a time any more. However, you should change your habit of reading in bed. Hopefully, your short-sightedness can be corrected by wearing proper glasses.

All in all, don’t worry. It’s no big deal!

Yours, sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】第一處：考查系動(dòng)詞與主語(yǔ)的對(duì)應(yīng)。此句為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語(yǔ)為I，則對(duì)應(yīng)的系動(dòng)詞應(yīng)為am。故was該為你am。

第二處：考查介詞的應(yīng)用。To be frank, almost eight students out ten in my class have to wear glasses to live a normal school life, include me. 此處中的關(guān)系為包含關(guān)系。故out后加of。

第三處：考查動(dòng)名詞的應(yīng)用。in my class have to wear glasses to live a normal school life, include me.此處的include做狀語(yǔ)，應(yīng)用動(dòng)名詞形式。故include改為including。

第四處：考查人稱(chēng)代詞的應(yīng)用。 First, us Chinese students who live under a great burden of examinations.此處位置為主語(yǔ)，應(yīng)用we。故us改為we。

第五處：考查句子結(jié)構(gòu)的應(yīng)用。First, us Chinese students who live under a great burden of examinations.此句為簡(jiǎn)單句，不用關(guān)系代詞who。故去掉who。

第六處：考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)的應(yīng)用。most of us with short-sightedness don’t have a good habit of using our eye, 眼睛在句中一般都用復(fù)數(shù)形式，且前面的人是復(fù)數(shù)。故eye改為eyes。

第七處：考查固定搭配的應(yīng)用。don’t have a good habit of using our eye, due to neither lack of knowledge of protecting eyes or carelessness.此處應(yīng)為短語(yǔ)either or。故neither改為either。

第八處：考查副詞的應(yīng)用。 I strong recommend that you not use your computer for such long a time any more. 此處的詞修飾動(dòng)詞 recommend，修飾動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用副詞。故strong改為strongly。

第九處：考查形容詞的應(yīng)用。 I strong recommend that you not use your computer for such long a time any more. 此處修飾形容詞long，應(yīng)用so。故such改為so。

第十處：考查轉(zhuǎn)折詞的應(yīng)用。However, you should change your habit of reading in bed.此處的關(guān)系不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故However改為Moreover/Besides。