Question

【題目】假如你是高一學生李華，你的美國筆友 Mike 本學期來華當交流生(exchange student)，他感覺與同學用漢語交流很費勁。請你根據(jù)以下要點給他寫一封建議信，幫助他快速提高漢語水平，同時，你也希望得到 Mike 給你英語學習的建議。

要點如下：

1.你的建議。

2.希望得到 Mike 學習英語的建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Mike,

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

Learning that you had difficulty in communicating in Chinese as an exchange student, I’m writing to offer you some advice.

First, it would be better if you can follow some famous TV programs like News Report in CCTV 1 to correct your pronunciation. Besides, I consider it effective to keep a diary in Chinese every day so that you can enlarge your vocabulary and get familiar with grammar. Most importantly, seize every opportunity to practice it, such as talking with native Chinese speakers, holding debates and singing Chinese songs? After all, practice makes perfect.

To be honest, I am also faced with some difficulties in learning English. Would you mind giving me some tips on it? That would be appreciated. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是高一學生李華，你的美國筆友 Mike 本學期來華當交流生(exchange student)，他感覺與同學用漢語交流很費勁。請你根據(jù)以下要點給他寫一封建議信，幫助他快速提高漢語水平，同時，你也希望得到 Mike 給你英語學習的建議。要點如下：1.你的建議。2.希望得到 Mike 學習英語的建議。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】本文段落清晰，結構嚴謹，句中運用高級詞匯、詞組和高級句子。Learning that you had difficulty in communicating in Chinese as an exchange student,句中使用了賓語從句；First, it would be better if you can follow some famous TV programs like News Report in CCTV 1 to correct your pronunciation.條件狀語從句用語句中；Besides, I consider it effective to keep a diary in Chinese every day so that you can enlarge your vocabulary and get familiar with grammar.目的狀語從句和賓語從句完美結合；such as talking with native Chinese speakers, holding debates and singing Chinese songs?現(xiàn)在分詞做結果狀語；After all, practice makes perfect.巧妙使用諺語；To be honest, I am also faced with some difficulties in learning English.獨立成分的運用堪稱經(jīng)典；另外，First, Besides, Most importantly, To be honest,的出現(xiàn)為文章增色添彩。