Question

學(xué)校英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)俱樂部正在進(jìn)行以“我最喜歡的樂隊(duì)”為題的征文比賽。西域男孩(Westlife)是深受大眾歡迎的愛爾蘭男子樂隊(duì)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格提示完成你的參賽作品。

 

樂隊(duì)名稱	西域男孩(Westlife)
成員	由五位英俊男孩組成
歷史	●1998年組建 ●在愛爾蘭、英國(guó)走紅 ●在非洲、澳大利亞、亞洲受歡迎 ●1999-2005年間，制作13張唱片，在英國(guó)排名第一 ●4千萬(wàn)張唱片在世界范圍內(nèi)銷售 ●2012年解散
喜歡該樂隊(duì)原因	●被Seasons in the Sun這首歌打動(dòng)，它詮釋了真愛的含義 ●……

注意：

1．詞數(shù)不少于60詞。

2．對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

3．文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Westlife is an Irish boy band.It has set many records in European music history and enjoys a high reputation all over the world—that is“the greatest boy band ever in history”.This fantastic band was made up of five shining guys in 1998.

Because of their handsome appearance and terrific singing,they got popular in Irish and Britain.Soon they are welcomed in Africa,Austrain and Asia.Between soon 1999 and 2005, Westlife made 13 records,standing  first on the top list in Britain.They geartly succeeded in singjing their wonderful songs.As a result,40 million albums were sold out all over the world.Personally,I was deeply touched by one of their fabulous songs“Seasons in the Sun”.This is the number one single which interprets the true meaning of love!

Although they broke up in 2012 after almost 14 years together,the guys’perseverance in chasing their dreams and fighting for their musical career gave me a strong positive push!

【解析】

試題分析：英語(yǔ)寫作是一種創(chuàng)作性的學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程。啟動(dòng)知識(shí)信息儲(chǔ)存，構(gòu)思立意，謀篇布局，遣詞造句，對(duì)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的正確性和準(zhǔn)確性、思維的邏輯性和文章的條理性都比口語(yǔ)要求更高。先審題，弄清寫作要求，審題是寫好作文的前提，理清思路，確定體裁、框架結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容。提醒考生注意時(shí)態(tài)及語(yǔ)態(tài)的使用。這篇短文有些意義的表達(dá)考生不好找到合適的單詞和短語(yǔ)，這就反映了考生的詞匯量的大小了。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：加強(qiáng)積累適量的詞匯、詞組和增加各種類型句子的運(yùn)用。把握好各種句型和詞匯的搭配，并從各類題材和體裁著手，思考內(nèi)容的連貫性，語(yǔ)言和句子的準(zhǔn)確性。會(huì)使用連接詞或過(guò)渡句使句子的連接起來(lái)，讀起來(lái)流暢。