Question

目前，家長(zhǎng)開(kāi)車(chē)接送孩子上下學(xué)已成為一個(gè)普遍現(xiàn)象，人們對(duì)此做法褒貶不一。下面是就此現(xiàn)象所做的問(wèn)卷調(diào)查結(jié)果。

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列圖表提示，描述被訪者的看法，并就此現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)150左右，文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

          3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nowadays it’s a common practice for parents to drive their children to and from school. This causes a heated debate in the society. A survey on it has just been conducted on this debate. The results are as follows.

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Nowadays it’s a common practice for parents to drive their children to and from school. This causes a heated debate in the society. A survey on it has just been conducted on this debate. The results are as follows.

Of the people who support driving to school, about half believe that driving children to school saves time, so the children can get up later. Another 30% think it comfortable to go by car, especially in bad weather. About 15% consider it reasonable just for the sake of children’s safety. Still others think it is a great time for parents to communicate with their children.

However, other people are against driving children to school. About 55% of them believe that it results in heavier traffic, especially around school areas. Around 30% think that driving kids to and from school will add to pressure on parents. It takes time, expense and effort to do this. Still again, 15% worry that children may become more dependent on their parents in the long term.

I think going to school by car is a better solution for young children. However, for older children it is unnecessary.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是看圖作文中的柱狀圖和餅圖，看圖作文對(duì)考生的要求較高，首先要看懂圖形，根據(jù)圖形的數(shù)據(jù)篩選出要點(diǎn)。再組織語(yǔ)言把要點(diǎn)翻譯成英文。本文的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)又算體現(xiàn)，實(shí)際上也算是正反觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)議論文，在發(fā)表對(duì)應(yīng)觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候要使用連接詞來(lái)連接各要點(diǎn)，使之成為一個(gè)整體。同時(shí)要變換使用高級(jí)句式，讓文章顯得不那么的單調(diào)。

考點(diǎn)：考查圖表類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：圖表類(lèi)作文對(duì)考生的要求較高，首先要看懂圖形，篩選出要點(diǎn)。本文的關(guān)鍵在于議論觀點(diǎn)的表達(dá)方式要合理，要用連接詞使之成為整體，高級(jí)詞匯和句型的運(yùn)用要適當(dāng)。